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Serving DigitalFlow Exhibition 7 : Untitled


This theme allowed our old as well as new artists to create their own work not based on a certain theme and has allowed our artists to show their skills and talents and what they are really capable in creating, and we could not be more proud of the outcome of this exhibition with 49 works by a total of 26 artists world wide


find this awesome pack here :

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enjoy guys :ahoy:
comment and critic are still welcome :)

and thank you so much :iconk3-studio: for featuring this work in this article ---> Digital Abstract ARTs in March, 2010

Totally apprecaited buddy! ;):beer:

alsooooo..........

This work won #Indo-Deviants The Best Of The Month in vector category :sarcasticclap: yeah, you can check it here ---> [link]


I'm totally satisfied with this piece! thanks DF for the amazing pack! ;):beer:
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:iconerikshoemaker:
I have seen earlier versions of this work and I can clearly say that you already improved this greatly. I am no expert on the field of abstract illustrations, but I can provide you with some general suggestions and advice on basics such as composition.

I think what might improve this a lot would be a more detailed shading with better depth. Right now all shapes are quite flat and therefore the composition appears cluttered. What about some highlights and shadows on each shape? Try to create depth by adding geometry in the fore- and background. Try to focus the viewers attention to a certain focal point. You might want to add something that totally stands out. Perhaps a photo or something?

In my opinion a wider variety of shapes and forms would also benefit this work immensely. Try to think out of the box and find any other (perhaps even unconventional) elements to make your work stand out. :) I am pretty sure the viewer won't lose interest in a more diversified and eyecatching artwork. A good example is =StrangeProgram's art, I think.
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:icondechastangel:
~dechastangel Apr 26, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
uh keren.....................
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~explosivevoice Dec 17, 2010  Hobbyist Interface Designer
wedan gan!!warnanya asik\^0^/
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*craytm Jun 19, 2010  Student Digital Artist
abstrak?
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:iconencoretheangel:
yup! makasih banget ya ;)
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:iconencoretheangel:
woow, thank you so much! I'm honored being featured besides those great works ;)
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:iconshoelesspeacock:
No worries, you deserve it. :)
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Mood: Wow! ~MMrailgun Apr 29, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So deep, this is serious business bro ! :)

No wonder if this art won !

Congrat² ^^
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:iconencoretheangel:
hey, I just realized you commented in this piece lol sorry man...

yeah, pretty serious because this was for DF.. hehe, I did my best for this piece but this is not perfect enough still has some errors like =kire1987 said :nod:
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~MMrailgun May 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No prob man, hehe

Well, i can't see any errors though .. but it looks really "tasty" :D

I've a hard time to make background for my art, and your art motivated me to learn abstract illustraion ... :)
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